do you remember when

robert gilbert

fade in:

scene 1:

*roberts state of mind seems to be antisocial shown with the news paper covering the face*

camera is on tripod andb holds a still frame

alfies and riacros state of mind is clear its clear theat they could or couldnt be thinking about a lot 

robert is the clear fateher of the boys and just wants to converstate with them 

*camera uses quite a wide lense on the scene*

*the house we are shown is very clean and tidy shpowing the family to have a nice lifestyle and coming from richer parents we are unknown off the time period as the only thing that shows the period is the vhs camera

*vhs filter*

*family room will have photos of the 3 however any photo of robert in it the face will be removed or the whole person will be cut out*

*dim lighting in the room with most of the light coming from the lamp* creating mystery to why there isd someone removed from the photo and trthe lighting is dim*

*audience hears vhs static*

modern looking house with nice walls and furniture. 

alfie ricardo, sitting on the sofa back straight facing forward with no emotion hands together . casual clothes,

robert reading a new paper, face hidden- casual clothes. *hands very pale*

 audience will be left uneasy at this scene as its so silent and the vhs effect leaves audience at unease. the lack of music or narative creates question for the audience as the static is just the only noise you will hear 

cut to:

*roberts state of mind show as a happy father as he talks to his children*

alfies and riacros state of mind is clear its clear that they could or couldnt be thinking about a lot 

camera is on tripod andb holds a still frame

*the camera is pointed to robert*

*news paper still covering face* *hands very pale* this creates questions and mystery as why is his hand pale and why is he covering his face he is the first character to speak and we dont see him*

robert: we have always had good times together 

*cuts to alfies and ricardos blank faces*

robert: do you remember the time when we went to grandams house.

*dim lighting throughout this part* *we are confused as to why he is talking about a boring memory in these unsettling atmosphere*

cut to:

*roberts state of mind is confusing as happy memories play over creepy imagery*

alfies and riacros state of mind is clear its clear that they could or couldnt be thinking about a lot

camera is on tripod and holds a still frame 

*camera cuts*

*burning house found footage plays* *quite screams* *multiple videos lay over this*

robert: it was so nice to see her you boys did have a good time*

robert: she always used to make the best pies.

*the questions still havent been answered and the tone of robert hasn't changed at all, alfies and riacrdos face are still blank and do not change beside they are blinking*

cut to:

camera is on tripod and holds a still frame

alfies and riacros state of mind is clear its clear that they could or couldnt be thinking about a lot 

*video stops screams stop*

*vhs static increases by 25%*

*lighting gets a little darker*

cut to:

camera is on tripod and holds a still frame

alfies and riacros state of mind is clear its clear that they could or couldnt be thinking about a lot 

camera is on tripod and holds a still frame

*camera cuts back*

*camera has zoomed i a little*

robert: you should eat the pies you made they look like they're getting cold

*confsion to why the vhs sttaic has been made louder and the lighting has gotten darker, this just creates more questions like was the grandma killed, however no questions has been answered yet*

cut to:

camera is on tripod and holds a still frame

alfies and riacros state of mind is clear its clear that they could or couldnt be thinking about a lot 

*drops news paper a little bit*

*voice gets 25% loud and more muffled*

cut to:

camera is on tripod and holds a still frame

alfies and riacros state of mind is clear its clear theat they could or couldnt be thinking about a lot 

*alfie and ricardo pick up pies slowly from table and put it on lap*

*video speeds up as and goes in rewind of the pie being cut and going off plate*

*flashes creepy found footage and the screams get louder and the vhs effect aswell*

this will make the viewer confused and disturbed as the bie being eaten as screanms play over is disturbing and creates a lot of mystery why like why the boys still havent spoken yet. the voice getting louder and muffled more from robert also makes it more 

cut to:

camera is on tripod and holds a still frame

alfies and riacros state of mind is clear its clear theat they could or couldnt be thinking about a lot 

robert: how was them pies, you ate them quick

robert: you've always loved pies, you used to make them all the time. you loved your meat pies.

*word meat has been blanked out to create more mystery*

robert: do you remember when you used to make pies with mr. hall

cut to:

*roberts state of mind is confusing as happy memories play over creepy imagery*

camera is on tripod and holds a still frame

alfies and riacros state of mind is clear its clear that they could or couldnt be thinking about a lot 

*camera cuts*

*found footage plays of a man running away for three seconds speeding up and slowing down and going in reverse* *screams get louder* the camera is the man running from the back not seeing his face

cut to:

camera is on tripod and holds a still frame

alfies and riacros state of mind is clear its clear theat they could or couldnt be thinking about a lot 

robert: he  used to make the best bleep bleep. 

robert: blank and you guys would always blank blank blank together.

cut to:

camera is on tripod and holds a still frame

alfies and riacros state of mind is clear its clear theat they could or couldnt be thinking about a lot 

*camera cuts back*

*camera has zoomed in more*

*news paper goes down more showing bit of the pale face*

*videos stop screams stop*

*roberts voice gets more mufflked and louder*

*the photo is now mssing froim the side and alfie and ricardos faces are still blank*

this works well as the story againb opens more questions and still has unanswered ones, the voice getting louder and muffled shows that we are soon near the end of what robert has to say.

cut to:

camera is on tripod and holds a still frame

alfies and riacros state of mind is clear its clear theat they could or couldnt be thinking about alot 

robert: dont forget that blank blank blank,

robert: that blank a good time.

robert: do you remeber when blank blank blank blank.

*camera cuts*

*roberts state of mind is confusing as happy memories play over nothing*

camera is on tripod and holds a still frame

alfies and riacros state of mind is clear its clear theat they could or couldnt be thinking about a lot 

*scene cuts to blank as the screams get louder*

everything comes overwheling here as theyre are a lot of screams as they got louder throughout, but is the loudest at the part when there is a lot of muffled and blank narrative and the scene is just plain blackk with a vhs filter over it

cut to:

camera is on tripod and holds a still frame

alfies and riacros state of mind is clear its clear theat they could or couldnt be thinking about a lot 

*roberts voice gets louder sounding evil like*

Robert: why did you blank blank blank

robert: you knew that blank blank blank

robert: how could you do that to blank blank blank.

cut to:

camera is on tripod andb holds a still frame

alfies and riacros state of mind is clear its clear theat they could or couldnt be thinking about a lot 

*camera cuts back*

*scenes is more zoomed in on alfies and ricardos face*

*scene shows alfie and ricardo sitting on the sofa blank face still with their pies on their laps*

scene has gotten darker and roberts voice and vhs static is louder too

cut to:

camera is on tripod andb holds a still frame

alfies and riacros state of mind is clear its clear theat they could or couldnt be thinking about a lot 

*voice is very loud and muffled 

robert: come on blank blank blank we must leave blank to go to blank blank blank, put them blank down we need to blank.

*alfie and ric puts down pies*

*camera pans out shows that robert never was in the chair*

*vhs static gets louder *

*pans out to show whole scene, Robert is dead on the floor with his guts ripped out*

there is no pictures in the room now and everything is blank*

*scene fades to black as loud screams play zooming out of alfie and Ricardo face*

the whole of the short film is very confusing and creates a lot of questions,m you will have to watch this multiple times to understand what is going on and you will need to look out to see if you missed anything. it is very unsettling as the voices getting deeper and the lack of the narrative makes the question who killed the father.